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Tuesday, 17 December 2019

one small step for the man: SLJ

One small step for the man 

Hello and for Summer learning journey this time I am going to do one about the first person to ever go on the moon. His name is Neil Armstrong and he was born on 5 August 1930.  For him to get to the moon it took 4 days, 6 hours and 45 minutes. Neil Armstrong spent 21 hours and 36 minutes on the moon. Neil Armstrong soon after died from an heart surgery. If I was Neil Armstrong and having my first step on the moon I would be scared but also exited to find stuff out and nervice because it's something new and you never know what might happen. That's it for now and have a good day or night. wait don't go yet I have a poem to show you first.

If I was Neil Armstrong I would be scared
I would feel like I'm weird
I'm lucky he doesn't have beard
being really famous 
I would just be unprepared
Like It's dangerous.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Victoria!

    Me again. Congratulations on completing another activity - you're doing such a great job! :)

    You've come up with a really creative poem here, Victoria. I like that you've made it rhyme. Did you find it tricky to come up with all the rhyming words? If you could, would you travel to the moon?

    Blog ya later!

    Mikey :)

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