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Friday 1 March 2019

100 word count story

                                                   The teddy bear  


One day me Tom and Sam were playing with our teddy bears. Then later that day we went to an amusement park and I took my teddy bear with me. In the car playing with my teddy bears dress. Then when we got there I went past the lost and found, a big slide and to the toy section to get another teddy but then I saw Temera and Freya also looking for another teddy bear. Then when we were done we all wanted to play with our teddy bear. then I screamed so loud

“where is my teddy bear?”  

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