Hello amazing readers!
Today I will be showing you my narrative writing. We were learning to do strong narrative writing, strong narrative is believable, descriptive and consistent. We were allowed to change the names and settings.
Today we did recreating basic sentences and making a new one that is descriptive and interesting.
Here is my basic sentence: Anna sat down. Anna touched the mirror. The glass moved.
Here is my new descriptive one: Anna sat down on the cold uncomfortable messy hard floor. Anna placed her dirty cold fingers on the clean mirror. The glass moved and changed the reflection of her.
Also this week we have been writing a story this week of a girl named Anna, here is a picture we used.
Here is my favorite bit of my story, by the way it isn't finished: Sad she stood up and started screaming “HELP HELP ANYONE PLEASE”. Looking at the mirror she ran over to it and punched it, hoping it broke she looked at it and got the shock of her life.
I hope you like it have a good day comment if you want have a good day!
Thursday, 4 June 2020
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I am looking forward to reading your story once it is completed Tori.
ReplyDeleteYou have started off with an intriguing sentence.I am curious to see what Anna saw.I hope you include it with your next bit of writing.