This term we have been working on writing a strong narrative. It has to be believable, descriptive and consistent. We started story's that I won't share yet but it's coming!
Yesterday, Room 9 were learning to show not tell. We looked for some action words and highlighted them, We then went on a website called Thesaurus and looked up our boring action words and found new ones and changed them to descriptive actions words!
Here is the link to Thesaurus: Thesaurus
Here is a example of how we did it.
Here's a weak action word sentence.
This term we have a good teacher Miss D.
Here is a sentence with a exiting fun action word.
This term we have a wonderful amazing teacher Miss D.
Thanks everyone for reading my blog! I hope you learnt something about strong narratives, Comment if you want have a stunning day.
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