Describing a picture

Malo lelei,

Today I am sharing with you my describing a picture writing. First I picked a photo, then went onto my language features document and put the picture in and wrote the date and wrote down: I see, I hear, I smell, I taste and I wonder. Here is my writing: I see

• I can see my feet shaking walking across the tightrope

• I can see the water crashing down like a tree falling to the ground

• I can see the branches sticking out of the side of the big water whole.

I hear

• I can hear the water crashing down underneath my feet

• I hear the sound of the wind

• I can hear the sound of things falling from the sides

I smell

• I smell the clear air from the sky

• I can smell the dirty water from the tightrope

I taste 

• I taste the saliva in my mouth 

• I taste the fresh air from the sky

• I can taste the dryness in my mouth from the air

I wonder

• I wonder if I’ll fall and break my neck on the water and I’ll die

• I wonder if the rope will break and I’ll fall and drown 

• I wonder if I fall of it and get knocked out and drown and die there

After that I got it checked off and wrote a story about it.

It was a good idea, I think. It was just there I thought to myself, I wonder if I’ll fall and break my neck on the water and die, what if the rope breaks and I’ll fall and drown, what if I fall and get knocked out and drown and die there. After worrying I think of something positive to get my mind off it. I taste the saliva in my mouth, I taste the fresh air from the sky, I taste the dryness in my mouth from the air. I can see the water crashing down like a tree falling to the ground. I can see my feet shaking walking across the tightrope. I can see the branches sticking out of the side of the big water whole. I can hear the water crashing down underneath my feet. I hear the sound of the wind. I smell the clear air from the sky.

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