Today I am showing you my writing for this week. First we watched a video showing some kids running and we then wrote down what we would feel and see and hear if we were on the track running. I first did what I hear and then see! We then had another task to turn our words into a sentence. Ok here it is.
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Hello Tori.
ReplyDeleteYou've got some great ideas.I like it when the writer can put a picture into my head with the words they use.
Maybe next time you could re-read your work before posting just to make sure it makes sense.