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Tuesday, 5 May 2020

STORY!

bonjour everyone. Today I am doing a story! It is about a made up story that I make up. Ok here it is...

It had been three months since it had happend. It had been three months since she had seen another living soul. She had to be brave if she was to make it through...  She was aging before her own eyes. Thinking the worst she crawled in a ball and hid in a big hollow at the bottom of a big long oak tree. She fell asleep after freezing, later on she finally woke up to talking... She was scared and hiding in the hollow. Then this police woman comes out pulling her away from the hollow grabbing her and running to the police car. They went to the station and she reunited with her parents. 

Hey guys it's done! Comment if you want have a good day.

2 comments:

  1. Annyeong Tori,
    What a long time to be missing! It would be really scary! This is a great imaginative narrative. I enjoyed it and look forward to more from you. Well done! :)....I hope I have a good day now that I have commented!

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  2. The good thing about made up stories Tori,is that,anything can happen.You can have a happy ending,a sad one,or even no ending at all.You might want to end the story where the reader makes up the ending.What a long time to be missing.I wonder if her family were thinking of her during that time.
    Thank you for sharing your learning.

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